Coffee Cubes Pitch 3.0
Since my last pitch, I received a lot of positive feedback, so I didn't change much. I did include a prop last time to show exactly what it is I was doing, in the form of the ice tray. This time I decided to have two props, the ice tray and an insulated cup. I narrowed down the pricing of my product and I think I decided on $5.99 for a bag of 12 cubes. I tried to fix my eye contact and be more direct with what I was saying.
Hey Nicole, great video! Like you, I did not change a whole lot as I received mostly positive feedback. It's difficult to be self critical, especially when others are giving you positive feedback but I like the fact that you changed your pitch up a little by adding an extra prop. The more you add helps draw the audience in further. Your tone and flow were also great.
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ReplyDeleteExcellent video! I commend your creativity, as the props really help the audience visualize what exactly they're dealing with and therefore be much more compelled to purchase your business proposition. I can definitely see that your eye contact has improved a lot, and what you're saying is clear and concise.
Great post, and good luck!
Hi Nicole,
ReplyDeleteSimilar to your last video, I loved it. You created such a compelling energy and enthusiasm that really intrigued me to keep watching. I feel you have perfected your pitch to a great level. Well done.
Hey Nicole! Best video so far! I loved how you explained everything in detail and added extra props. However, I would say the angle of the video is not the best. Also, it would be helpful if you turned your phone sideways. Eye contact was a lot better but sometimes I felt like you were looking away. Overall, fantastic job. I love how you start off with a story. Starting with a story is so impactful because it keeps me engaged and I will remember it! Stories are essential when selling your products! Keep it up.
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